Halloween Ghost Story Challenge : The Passenger in the Rear Mirror

This story happened about four years ago in Yogyakarta, Indonesia — a city still surrounded by sacred places and old mysteries.

There had been a tragic bus accident on a winding mountain road. Everyone on board was killed instantly. After that, some locals claimed they could still hear people screaming at night — voices full of pain, fading into the wind.

Time passed, and the story slowly disappeared.

Three years later, my wife and I drove along that same road late at night in our sedan. Every 25 meters, a streetlight would pass behind us, glowing faintly in the rear-view mirror. We were simply enjoying the mountain drive, chatting softly, not thinking about anything… and no one was sitting in the back seat.

Then suddenly, our conversation stopped.

I saw something — a dark silhouette in the rear-view mirror, blocking the light of the streetlamp we had just passed. My chest tightened — fear mixed with curiosity. I looked again at the next light, and the shadow was still there. It looked like someone sitting right in the middle of the back seat… but I could only see its outline.

I glanced at my wife. She was silent, like holding her breath, staring straight ahead. I said nothing — I didn’t want to scare her.

With each passing streetlight, the figure remained. Only I could see it — the angle of the mirror aligned perfectly with my eyes and that shadow.

After about five streetlights, we turned a corner and began to see the lights of nearby houses. Suddenly, I felt the car lift slightly — the suspension rising as if a weight had just been lifted… or as if someone had quietly stepped out.

The shadow was gone.

I gathered my courage and turned around. The back seat was empty — only a tumbler and two packs of snacks lay there.

Then my wife broke the silence.

“Did you feel it too?” she asked softly.

“I saw it… in the mirror,” I replied.

She nodded, her voice trembling.

“I smelled blood. That’s why I held my breath.”

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happy halloween guys :jack_o_lantern:

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Thanks for reading my story, bro.

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That’s the last time I hop into your car for a lift :winking_face_with_tongue:

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Perhaps due to motion sickness :sweat_smile:

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nice, greetings from me in Borneo

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What is it!!!

Falls Homer Simpson GIF

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Which part of Borneo are you from, bro? I used to live in South Kalimantan for almost five years.

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Kinda scary :face_holding_back_tears::face_holding_back_tears:

Are u indonesian?